Read it Out Loud First…
You really have to wonder if this stuff works. I got this email earlier this week.
My name is Mr. Robert. I am a broker; I have an investor who is looking for a lucrative business to invest in. If you have any lucrative business that needs funding, kindly send the business plan for my perusals. I await your reply for good business collaboration.
Regards.
So, what sort of investor would not want a lucrative business to invest in? What sort of broker is Mr. Robert? Are this people for real? Who answers this sort of stuff anyway?
I am guessing if they were to read it out loud to someone whose first language is English they would not send out stuff like this. Just saying…
Now I need to get back to work to see if I can find a lucrative business.
Happy Wednesday!!
Jerry Robertson
678-231-1578